I've seen that SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO many times
I'm sorry, i'm don't want to generalize. I really like your animation and the style of it, don't get me wrong. But the RIPPING YOUR HEART out thing and EVIL GIRLS has just been used like a million times. The reason i gave a 7 it's because the story is nothing but a not original point of view about love.
And, seriously, girls shouldn't rule you (if this animation speaks to your emotions), unless you really want to be subordinated by one.